Initial pages for the Tutorial

Dear Julio and All Southern Gems Teammates, Julio, you did a wonderful job! I'm so glad we got permission to use the map too. I could only find two little picky editing things to fix. On the page "Using a Star Chart" on #2 add an s to constellation. On the page "Measure a Star's Brightness" the word according needs two c's: according That's it. After fixing the things Sebastian mentioned and these two little things, the pages look finished to me. Anyone else notice anything needing change or clarification? If so, let us know right away. Thank you for your great work, Julio! Other teammates, did you know that Julio is coming to Boston on Wednesday and that I am getting to meet him in person on Thursday!!!!!! I'm very excited whenever I get to meet one of my Southern Gems friends. I'll make sure we get a picture taken so you can see us together. Maybe some of you other people on the team will meet and put a picture on her too! :-) Best Wishes to All of you, Joan <!--Session data-->

Hi, Julio,

thanks for all your work on the tutorial!

Some comments below. When you mention Betelgeuse, don't include the Harvard Designation (0549+07) since he AAVSO has got rid of this old nomenclature system.

Greek letters in star names should be lowercase, in this example, alpha Orionis. When you describe Orion, what does it mean "his club"? "Its magnitude may drop below 1.2" instead of "the magnitude"

"super-giant" should be supergiant.

In the chart for "using a variable star chart", Bellatrix is 16 instead of 17 but I wouldn't use it because you are already giving Alnilam as 17 and since this has to be an easy example, it's better that brightness differences are large. Or you could use Bellatrix (16) and get rid of Alnilam. In measure a star's brightness, "assign them a number acording to the brightness" ="according to their brightness". I think that's it. Best wishes,

Sebastian.